Early in the morning, diving in the deep blue sea, I saw by an ancient statue, shaped like a body. I could see 4 divers swimming across the sea with lights and swim fins. As quiet as a mouse I could hear bubbling noises coming from our air tanks. I felt nervous, frightened but excited because nobody had seen this ancient treasure before. I wondered if there was something in that ancient statue I surely wanted to find out but there is no time for that now, I have to go back. I wonder if I will see dolphins as I swim to the surface?
Hi Salma,its Grace here from Grey Main school Good work I love your descriptive writing also how you described how you felt. Anyways I love this writing but maybe next time add more pictures. Kai Pai Keep up the good work Bye.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Salma
ReplyDeleteIt's Zoe from room 24!
I like your writing about diving in the deep blue!
My favorite part is when you wrote I wonder if I will see dolphins as I swim to the surface?
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